I read over Cassandra Thompson's work during the class period. For the most part, it was well written and followed the AP style. I made a suggestion about a quote that I found confusing. It came right after the lead and seemed out of context.
There were only a few AP style problems. I also noticed she quoted herself often, which works to complete the assignment, but quotes from others would be nice.
She did not have the current location of the survivors. I told her that it was something you would prefer to be incorporated.
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