Monday, October 16, 2006
Suggestions for Nicole
The article is well done but attribution is needed, especially in the second paragraph. You also have an excellent quote from Lawson which I think you can add right after it says where he is cited for underage drinking. Try using police said after the second sentence in the second paragraph or maybe using something like "police reports state".
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