http://www.wisinfo.com/northwestern/sports/stories/sports_20508377.shtml
Larry Graham of the Oshkosh Northwestern did a great job of adding a human aspect to his story on the Titan's doubleheader versus UW-Whitewater. Graham spoke of Ronessa Stampfli and her background and then related to the story. Also Graham didn't was creative in his word usage saying ". . Titans surfed to victory in game one on a tsunami of back-to-back doubles". I think that Larry does a good job of bringing life to the most basic of stories. Finally, I thought that he had good quotes and from the people that mattered in the piece, the Titan's Head Coach Cindy Suess and Ronessa. Overall good piece on a tough topic if you don't know the game that well.
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